What Does Iniquitous Mean?

wondrous memeWelcome to Wondrous Words Wednesday, a great way to learn some new vocabulary.  Visit Kathy at Bermuda Onion for links to more word nerdy words.

I have written and edited (and edited) a YA manuscript, and now it’s time to query agents.    I entered the Query Kombat Contest for a chance to get agents to see my stuff.  I didn’t get far in the contest, but I DID learn a new word from someone else’s entry.   I also got some great feedback, so it was a worthwhile adventure.

I can’t remember the exact sentence from the  entry, but it went something like:

Gwen made it her personal mission to purge the iniquitous crooks in Shadow Town.

I thought maybe the author meant “ubiquitous”, so I looked it up.  Nope.  She taught me a new word.  Thank you fellow Query Kombatant!

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The Joker: an iniquitous character

iniquitous \i-‘ni-kwə-təs\ adj. from Latin iniquus, uneven, from in + aequus equal ; very unfair or evil; characterized by gross injustice

Of course I should have known from the “equal” root that this word meant unequal.  I need more sleep.

Word Nerd Workout

Share a juicy synonym for iniquitous in the comments below.  My example: nefarious.

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Thanks for getting nerdy with me!

Julia 

Five KidLit Books for Fun Summer Reading

As a mom of four school-aged children, I don’t usually say this, but:

I’m ready for summer vacation!!!

The year-end field trips, requests for cookies, and awards ceremonies have zapped my last gigabyte of energy.  My seven-year-old son cried four times before he left for school yesterday; we’re all sleep deprived.  I can’t wait to catch up on rest and enjoy my children, instead of herding them to the next picnic.

Summer ReadingI’ve cut back on our obligations this summer.  No rec league swim team (and the three hours of practice each day.)  Fewer camps.  More simple goodness, like:

  • Visits to the pool, where they will play and I will read
  • Fewer high sodium/ high carb snacks and more healthy munching; my kids don’t know it yet, but next week I’m making hummus!
  • Hikes and bike rides- we live in the mountains for Pete’s sake!
  • Downloading audiobooks and that catchy new Ed Sheeran song, aptly titled “Sing”.
  • Did I mention READING?

 

I’ve always toyed with the idea of a Mother-Daughter summer book club, but I never followed up on the notion, until this year.  A good friend who loves to read, but whose daughter doesn’t, asked if I’d be interested in meeting a few times over the summer with our girls to discuss books.

You know what I said, right?

Awesome idea!

So now I’m researching fun, light, and not too challenging books to offer to the girls.  Here’s what I’ve got so far:

  • Holes by Louis Sachar:  Stanley Yelnats has always been plagued with bad luck, which  lands him at Camp Green Lake, which is neither a camp nor a lake.  At this detention center, Stanley meets a motley cast of characters, all doomed to dig holes in the hot sun every day and report any findings to the abrasive camp warden. But soon, Stanley figures out that the digging sessions are for more than building character.
  • Sisterhood of PantsSisterhood of the Traveling Pants by AnnBrasheres   At the brink of summer vacation, Carmen discovers an old pair of jeans at a thrift shop.  They don’t look like anything special, so she eventually plans to throw them away.  But her friends Tibby, Lena, and Bridget think they’re fabulous, and surprisingly, the jeans make each girl look awesome.  The friends decide to take the “vow of the Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants.”  When they part for the summer, the pants begin a memorable summer journey.
  • Maniac Magee by Jerry Spinelli  Jeffrey Lionel “Maniac” Magee has lived with his uptight aunt and uncle for eight years- and he’s had enough.  It’s time to run.  And not just away.  Maniac’s running causes mayhem in his small and racially divided town.
  • I’d Tell You I Love You, But Then I’d Have to Kill You by Ally Carter  Cammie Morgan attends the  Gallagher Academy for Exceptional Young Women.  These girls aren’t just academically talented; they’re spies.  They learn advanced martial arts in PE and chemical warfare in science. Sure, Cammie can speak fourteen different languages and kill a man seven different ways, but can she date a normal boy who must never know her secret?
  • maniac mageeFlipped by Wendelin Van Draanen  In middle school, relationships, especially between boys and girls, are never simple.  Juli Baker flips for her neighbor, Bryce Loski, but he doesn’t share the sentiment.  Years later, just as Juli realizes that Bryce isn’t the guy of her dreams, Bryce falls for her.  Will these two learn to see beyond the surface and finally connect?

 

 

 

Surely, they will like some of these.

What are you looking forward to this summer?  Can you recommend some books for my list?

Thanks for stopping by!

Julia

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What Does Sartorial Mean?

Wondrous Words Wednesday

wondrous memeWelcome to Wondrous Words Wednesday, a great meme for learning new words.  For links to other vocabulary posts, visit Kathy at Bermuda Onion.  You could learn a lot!

My word today comes from the Merriam-Webster word of the day email.  As soon as I saw sartorial, I knew I should remember it.  It made me think of Physical Therapy school and anatomy class, which you might not understand when you see the definition.

sartorial \sär-‘tōr-ē-əl\ adj from Latin sartor tailor; of or relating to a tailor or tailored clothes; generally, relating to clothes

This boy used his sartorius muscle to cross his leg.
This boy is using his sartorius muscle

Are you wondering how clothes relate to anatomy?  The longest muscle in your body is the sartorius muscle, or “the tailor muscle”; it starts on the outside hip and crosses the front of the thigh to attach inside the knee.  It helps you rotate your hip out to place your ankle on the opposite knee.

Word Nerd Workout

Let’s try to use sartorial in a sentence.  For example,

Quentin, a programming genius at 17, didn’t have the time or patience for sartorial concerns like coordinating his clothes, or washing them, for that matter.

Your turn!  Leave your sentence in the comments.

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Thanks for getting nerdy with me!

Julia

 

What You Should Know about The Fault in Our Stars Before You See the Movie

TFIOS 2My 12-year-old daughter came home from school the other day and announced, “Everyone is going to see The Fault in Our Stars movie when it comes out.”

Everyone?

Well, she conceded, about 90%.

Then she put her hands on her hips and gave me the why don’t you let me do what other parents let their kids do look.

I get it a lot.

I sighed and asked, “Do you even know what the book is about?”

She admitted she did not.  And so I launched into an explanation of one of my favorite books, which is about to hit the big screen.

Here’s what you and my daughter need to know:

  • TFIOS is the love story of Hazel and Augustus, two teenagers diagnosed with cancer and contemplating the Big Questions of life.
  • You should read it first.  I say this about all books, but I really mean it this time.  John Green, the author of The Fault in Our Stars, tells this sad story with an admirable mix of humor, wit, and brutal honesty.  I’m not sure how his “voice” will transfer to the big screen.  Sure, his dialogue will make it, but what about great lines that are part of Hazel’s narrative, like

I fell in love the way you fall asleep: slowly, and then all at once.

Or:

Funerals, I had decided, are for the living.

Its only 313 pages; most people I know finish it in two days.  Read it!

  • TFIOSIt’s sad.  These are kids contemplating their own deaths.  I cried.  For two days.  I’m actually hesitant about seeing the movie because I don’t want to go through the trauma again.  My 14-year-old son read TFIOS recently and said, “It was well written.”  He’s a John Green fan, and I shared TFIOS with him because he tends to ponder things at great length, much like the main characters.  But he didn’t like it.  I think it disturbed him a little, although he won’t admit it.  He does NOT want to see the movie.

It’s sad.

  • There’s a lot of deep stuff going on.  Hazel and Augustus ask big questions like, “What kind of mark do I want to leave on the world?” and “How do I want people to remember me?”  and “Why are scrambled eggs only served for breakfast?”  It will take a mature reader/ movie goer to grasp all the themes and meanings Mr. Green has weaved into his story.  And Augustus likes to use big words.  For example:

I was, like, the prototypical Hoosier kid… all about resurrecting the lost art of the midrange jumper, but then one day… I couldn’t figure out why I was methodically tossing a spherical object through a toroidal object.

See what I mean?

  • There is one sexual encounter, tactfully written.  I’m actually not as concerned about that as I am about the deeper meanings going unappreciated.

Personally, I don’t think this book/movie is for tweens, not because of “the scene”, but because when my daughter reads/sees it, I want her to really get it.  What a waste to go through all that sad and not understand the humor and beauty too.

Have I missed anything?  What else should people know about TFIOS?  Do you plan on seeing the movie?

Thanks for stopping by!

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Julia

Vocab from I Am the Messenger: Aspersion

wondrous memeWelcome to Wondrous Words Wednesday, a great meme for word nerds!  Visit Kathy at Bermuda Onion for more great words.

I’m currently re-reading I Am the Messenger by Markus Zusak for my book club.  Some teenagers I know call this book “life changing,” but so far, I’m not getting it.  Zusak has a very distinct style- sometimes beautifully poetic, often staccato.  Lots of “telling”- somehow, he gets away with it.  (In the writing world, we often hear, “show, don’t tell.”)

Here’s a quote from Ed Kennedy, the main character of I am the Messenger, while he testifies at a trial:

The judge chimes in now.  “And as for ugly – Mr. Kennedy, could you please refrain from casting such aspersions?  You’re not an oil painting yourself, you know.”

Messengeraspersion \ə-‘spər-zhen, -shən\ noun, from Latin aspersus, from ad– + spargere to scatter; 1)sprinkling with water especially in religious ceremonies; 2) a false misleading charge meant to harm someone’s reputation; 3) the act of making such a charge

I’m Catholic and never knew there was a name for the sprinkling of holy water that goes on in church, especially around Easter.  Thanks Wondrous Words!  Here, obviously, Zusak is using the second meaning, a misleading charge.

Word Nerd Workout

Use aspersion in a sentence.  For example,

Claire fumed while she listened to the girls spread aspersions about her friend at the lunch table.

Spread the word on Twitter: Word nerd word: aspersion = a false misleading charge, via @juliatomiak 

Your turn!  Thanks for getting nerdy with me today!

Julia

What I Liked (and Didn’t) About And the Mountains Echoed

Mountains EchoedDid you realize that May is “Short Story Month”?  How appropriate, since most people (especially students and mamas) have so many field trips, projects, and end of year celebrations in May that reading time gets trumped! (Of course, I chose this month to read Gone Girl, which is keeping me up way too late every night.)

I haven’t read many short stories, but I recently read a novel that felt like a short story collection.

And the Mountains Echoed by Khaled Hosseini reads like a compilation of intertwined short stories.  Hosseini’s tales span several generations and many countries, including Greece, America, and of course, Afghanistan.  To fully appreciate the tapestry of interwoven plot lines, you must pay attention to names and places.  When you pull everything together, it’s really cool.

What I liked about the book

As with his other famous book The Kite Runner, Hosseini masterfully strings words together to describe several bittersweet truths about life and the human existence.  For example:

The decline of one’s own body is incremental, as nearly imperceptible as it is insidious.  Seeing Thalia white-haired presents jolting evidence of her steady, inevitable march toward old age- and, by association, my own.

What a beautiful way to describe a phenomenon I’ve recently noticed – when I see friends or relatives after a long absence and note the outward signs of their age, I feel older.

Here’s another wonderful passage, one that carries special resonance with me, a “creative”:

I see the creative process as a necessarily thievish undertaking.

Hosseini’s ability to capture these kernels of truth always impresses me.

And the Mountains Echoed does not have the stark violence of that pivotal scene in The Kite Runner.  But it isn’t a lighthearted read, either.

What I didn’t like about the book

At first I didn’t enjoy Mountains at all; I described it to friends as “soap operas set in Afghanistan.”  Many of the early stories focus on the ugliest of human tendencies: jealousy, selfishness, manipulation, and distrust.  I was only a third of the way in and had already endured one character pushing her sibling out of a tree (which led to a paralyzing injury) and two assisted suicides.  It got to the point where I reached the middle of a story and thought, how will this one go wrong?

Also, I didn’t get a deep understanding of Afghan culture and history like I did with The Kite Runner.

Two of the later stories end, if not happily, at least with a marginal sense of closure.  I finally found a few characters that I could like and respect.  Yet there is always a haunting sense of something missed, something lacking.

This book is not a “pick me up” kinda read.

Final recommendation

You would probably like And The Mountains Echoed if:

  •  you crave beautiful prose and exotic settings
  • you aren’t afraid to spend time with the dark side of human nature
  • you are willing to pay attention to names, dates and places to discover how the characters’ lives interconnect
  • you like novels that experiment with new ways of storytelling

For a more traditional novel, I highly recommend The Kite Runner.  But be warned, a very important scene in the book involves a brutal sexual assault, and this plot point disturbs many readers.

Have you read And the Mountains Echoed?  What did you think?  Can you recommend any short story collections?

FYI, if you’re interested in listening to short stories, my friend Andrea Bagdley has compiled a great list of story telling podcasts at her blog Andrea Reads America.

Thanks for stopping by!

Julia

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