I had an argument with my ten-year-old son yesterday. It wasn’t about screen time or whether he could “check his farm.” (Holy creepers, who thinks up games like “Hay Day” and how can we stop them?)
We were sitting in the library doing homework, and a literary debate ensued. My son had to write a persuasive essay convincing his classmates to read Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. His essay included praise for the adventure and action in the story, as well as the mystery. But I thought something was missing.
“What about Harry?” I asked. “Doesn’t he make you want to read the story? What do you like about him?”
“Well, he’s the good guy,” my son said.
“So you like him just because he’s the good guy?” I asked.
My son nodded.
“But what makes him good?”
“He just is, because he’s the main character.”
This sounded too simple. Granted, he’s ten, but I had to press.
“So all good guys are the same?”
He shrugged. “Yes.”
“Harry is just like Artemis Fowl?”
“Well, no. Artemis robs people.”
“But he does good things too.”
My seven-year-old, who was sitting nearby with a copy of Superfudge in his hands, perked up and said, “Harry is brave.”
I smiled. Now we were getting somewhere.
My ten-year-old rolled his eyes, but I wouldn’t give up. Why do kids and adults all over the world love Harry Potter? It’s not just because he’s the good guy, is it?
What makes a great character
In his book Plot and Structure, James Scott Bell asserts that a good story must have a compelling lead – someone to sympathize with, route for, relate to. Harry Potter definitely fills this role. My parents weren’t killed when I was a baby, but I can sympathize with Harry’s loss. I want him to triumph over the evil Voldemort. I love his perseverance and his courage as he strives to protect what is good. Like my son said, Harry’s a good guy.
But Harry isn’t perfect. In fact, he screws up a lot. And I can relate to that. Thank goodness Harry has Hermione to keep him in line, which reminds me of another good character quality: loyalty.
Think about your favorite lead characters. What common qualities do they share?
- strength
- courage
- intelligence
- persistence
- loyalty
- a few flaws
In some ways, my son is right: the “good guys” have some predictable attributes that draw us to them. But that can’t be enough.
What makes each character uniquely endearing is the way he or she overcomes obstacles. Artemis takes down evil with intricate and highly intellectual plans. Harry has an invisibility cloak and lots of help from his friends. Katniss has her bow and arrow, and Hazel Grace has her cynical wisdom. These are the things that make us love them.
Here’s my formula for a great character:
heroic qualities + unique personality traits or situations = compelling lead

Who are some of your favorite characters and what do you think makes them great? Do you agree with my formula or are there other components to a great character? Share your thoughts in the comments!
Julia















