What Makes a Great Character: A Reader’s Perspective

Deathly HallowsI had an argument with my ten-year-old son yesterday.  It wasn’t about screen time or whether he could “check his farm.”  (Holy creepers, who thinks up games like “Hay Day” and how can we stop them?)  

We were sitting in the library doing homework, and a literary debate ensued.  My son had to write a persuasive essay convincing his classmates to read Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.  His essay included praise for the adventure and action in the story, as well as the mystery.  But I thought something was missing.

“What about Harry?”  I asked.  “Doesn’t he make you want to read the story?  What do you like about him?”

“Well, he’s the good guy,” my son said.

“So you like him just because he’s the good guy?” I asked.

My son nodded.  

“But what makes him good?”

“He just is, because he’s the main character.”

This sounded too simple.  Granted, he’s ten, but I had to press.

“So all good guys are the same?”

He shrugged.  “Yes.”

“Harry is just like Artemis Fowl?”

“Well, no.  Artemis robs people.”

“But he does good things too.”

My seven-year-old, who was sitting nearby with a copy of Superfudge in his hands, perked up and said, “Harry is brave.”

I smiled.  Now we were getting somewhere.

My ten-year-old rolled his eyes, but I wouldn’t give up. Why do kids and adults all over the world love Harry Potter?  It’s not just because he’s the good guy, is it?

What makes a great character

In his book Plot and Structure, James Scott Bell asserts that a good story must have a compelling lead – someone to sympathize with, route for, relate to.  Harry Potter definitely fills this role.  My parents weren’t killed when I was a baby, but I can sympathize with Harry’s loss.  I want him to triumph over the evil Voldemort.  I love his perseverance and his courage as he strives to protect what is good.  Like my son said, Harry’s a good guy.

But Harry isn’t perfect.  In fact, he screws up a lot.  And I can relate to that.  Thank goodness Harry has Hermione to keep him in line, which reminds me of another good character quality: loyalty.

Think about  your favorite lead characters.  What common qualities do they share?

  • strength
  • courage
  • intelligence
  • persistence
  • loyalty
  • a few flaws

In some ways, my son is right: the “good guys” have some predictable attributes that draw us to them.  But that can’t be enough.

What makes each character uniquely endearing is the way he or she overcomes obstacles. Artemis takes down evil with intricate and highly intellectual plans.  Harry has an invisibility cloak and lots of help from his friends.   Katniss has her bow and arrow, and Hazel Grace has her cynical wisdom.  These are the things that make us love them.

Here’s my formula for a great character:

heroic qualities + unique personality traits or situations = compelling lead

My youngest son just wanted to sit in the cool reading chair.
My youngest son just wanted to sit in the cool reading chair.

Who are some of your favorite characters and what do you think makes them great?  Do you agree with my formula or are there other components to a great character?  Share your thoughts in the comments!

Julia 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wondrous Words for College Rivalry: Hokies and ‘Hoos

wondrous memeWelcome to Wondrous Words Wednesday, a great meme for learning vocabulary.  Visit Kathy at bermudaonion.net to find more interesting words.  

Today I’m guest posting at my friend Nicole’s blog, Work In Sweats Mama.  Nicole is an avid runner and reader like me, but there’s one big way we differ.

She’s a Hokie.  I’m a ‘Hoo.

For those of you outside of Virginia, let me just say that the rivalry between the Hokies of Virginia Tech and the ‘Hoos of the University of Virginia is intense.  Don’t believe me?  Look at this:

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I’m sure there are anti-Hoo t-shirts on the Tech campus, probably pegging all UVA students as snobby and stuck up.  (Not true!)

For Wondrous Words, I did some research on Virginia mascots.

HokieHokie: a loyal Virginia Tech fan and the official mascot of Virginia Tech.  Although the Hokie is now embodied as a turkey, the term originally came from a cheer written by senior O.M. Stull in 1896.  The school was changing its name from Virginia Agricultural and Mechanical College to Virginia Polytechnic Institute and needed a new cheer, mascot, etc.  Mr. Stull’s cheer began:

Hokie, Hokie, Hokie, Hy!

Tech, Tech, VPI

According to Tech’s website, the word Hokie had no significance other than to draw attention to the cheer.

 

‘Hoo:  Short for “Wahoo”, the unofficial mascot for UVA.  (Our official mascot is the Cavalier.)  Some say that a Wahoo is a fish that can drink twice its own weight, a nod to our “party school” reputation. 😉   Another story says that Washington and Lee baseball fans dubbed the Virginia players “Wahoos” during the fiercely contested rivalry between the two in-state schools in the 1890s.  Like “Hokie”, “Wahoo” is also part of an old school cheer:

Wahoowa Wahoowa

Uni-v Vir-gin-i-a!

I’m happy to say that I’ve overcome my aversion to all things Hokie.  This is a good thing, since I live in southwest Virginia, the heart of Hokie Nation.  My son plays soccer on a VT field, my daughter swims for H2okies (although she claims the claw on her suit gives her a rash 😉 ), and best of all, I’ve met wonderful Hokies like Kathy (our meme hostess) and Nicole.

No word nerd workout today; I’m closing comments here, but please stop by Nicole’s site instead.  I’m sharing my tips on how to find great books for eager young readers.

Oh, and one last thing.  As of March 3, 2014, UVA’s basketball team is #5 in the nation and #1 in the ACC.  Just had to get that in.

WAHOOWA!  🙂

Julia 

 

Astral Tide Release: Dystopian with a Sci Fi Twist!

A few weeks ago, author Anna Silver visited my blog to explain how her young adult series Otherborn compares to other dystopian novels.  Anna combines fantasy, science fiction, and dystopian elements to create a truly original world in the Otherborn series. (Actually, it’s two worlds!)   I’m excited to announce that the second book in the series, Astral Tide, releases TODAY, February 28, 2014.

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To give you a refresher on the Otherborn series, here’s a look into the story:

London and her friends are fugitives in a reprocessed world where anything New is illegal. But as Otherborn, they’re different. They can dream and create, which hasn’t gone unnoticed. After fleeing CapitalCity with an assassin on their heels, the Otherborn found nothing went according to plan. Now, they are down by two and on the run in the Outroads, but the Tycoons keep mysteriously gaining on them. And seven months later, London is no closer to her promise to go back for Rye, if there is anything left to go back for. But Zen is teaching London that there may be more to her heart than the pieces she left behind, and London can’t help but feel guilty about not looking back since they fled New Eden. Should she hold on to hope that Rye is more than just a memory, or embrace a new life and love with Zen?

Anna has shared an excerpt of AstralTide with us today.  In this scene, London has returned to the Astral plane in a dream as her Other. As her powers to use the Astral grow, she struggles to come to terms with how it is changing her and blurring the lines between her waking self, London, and her dream self, Si’dah.

Astral_Tide_bettersizeJPGAround her, the green blades of grass began to run together, melting into a watery landscape to reflect her mood. The Astral was sulking like a scolded pet. If she didn’t watch it, she’d sink straight through to the Lowplane and have to wade her way through the marshes. These were setbacks she didn’t need.

In the time they’d recovered their memories and taken up training with Hantu-Degan, she’d become so intertwined with the Astral itself that she impacted it often when she didn’t want to. Hantu called it “warping”. It was a show of power, but also a display of how little control she had. What she needed to learn was how to help London pull the Astral into their world and shape it to fit their needs. Not how to warp the Astral planes like wet paint.

 “I see something is on your mind.” Her teacher’s kind voice floated to her.

Si’dah looked up to see Hantu at her side. She never noticed his approach. He was good at that. “How can you tell?” she asked facetiously. This was London’s dour humor coming out in her.

Hantu smiled. “You are so much like one another now. It’s funny to think you were ever apart from her.”

Si’dah squinted into the distance where great walls of rock were springing up on the horizon, a spontaneous mountain range. “It gets harder to keep myself separate,” she said, and the mountains plummeted back into the ground of the Midplane, a cloud of dust rising in their stead.

Hantu was untroubled by this. “So don’t. Surrender to her, Si’dah. You are one now. Accept it.”

Si’dah sighed and looked at Hantu. His proud lines were forever changed by the Other’s presence. He no longer looked like the Hantu she knew, nor the Degan London had known, but an eerie combination of both. “As you have?”

“Yes,” he said. “You know that’s what’s holding you back. You must open yourself fully to London as she must open herself fully to you. For all your power here, for all your learning, you cannot bring that into her world until you drop the barriers you keep erecting.”

“I don’t want to lose myself…again.” It was the truth. Waking up to remember after sixteen years of forgetting was too hard on both of them. If she let go, would she slip away again? Disappear?

“You won’t,” Hantu assured her. “You can’t lose yourself in London because you are London. Just as you can’t lose yourself in the Astral, because you are the Astral. It is the fabric you are stitched from, understand?”She didn’t understand, but she was trying. She looked down to see her once stick-straight hair bunch into rippling waves. Si’dah gasped and they relaxed— some. Soon she would be like Hantu-Degan, a seamless blend of London and herself. Who knew where one began and the other ended?

 Want to read more?  Look for Astral Tide here:

Also, enter the Rafflecopter giveaway for some cool prizes from Anna!

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Author Anna Silver
Author Anna Silver

Anna Silver is an author and artist living in the greater Houston area with her family, pets, and overactive imagination. She studied English Writing & Rhetoric at St. Edward’s University. Otherborn, her first published novel, has been featured on two of Amazon’s “Bestsellers” lists. She is represented by Rebecca Podos and Nicole LaBombard of Rees Literary Agency.

Vocabulary for Foodies: Umami

Welcome to Wondrous Words Wednesday!  Get ready to learn something new, and perhaps get a little hungry.  Visit Kathy at bermudaonion.net for more fun words.

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This word nerd word was so interesting, my ten-year-old insisted on visiting the library to find it.  He read Rebecca Stead’s middle grade novel Liar and Spy several months ago, and he couldn’t remember the word introduced in book for a special sense, a fifth taste.  After a few seconds of hasty flipping in the juvenile fiction aisle, he found it: umami.

steakumami \ü-mā-mē\ noun; Japanese; a taste sensation that is meaty or savory and is produced by several amino acids and nucleotides

I’d never heard about this taste until reading Rebecca Stead’s novel.  How about you?

Word Nerd Workout

Can you think of food that fits this taste?  I’m imagining grilled steak marinated in soy sauce.  Hmm.  Too bad it’s too cold to grill these days.  Hopefully soon!

Tweet: Vocabulary for foodies: umami. Learn something new from the culinary world via Word Nerd @juliatomiak http://ctt.ec/8ae4E+ #amreading

Thanks for getting your foodie nerd on with me today!

Julia 

P.S.  Here’s my review for Liar and Spy

Another Way to Read E-books: Scribd

scribd picMy book club is reading And the Mountains Echoed by Khaled Hosseini this month.  I haven’t started yet, and I wanted a quick and economical way to get my hands on this book!  So I browsed the e-book collection at my local library.

Sigh.  The listings didn’t even include The Kite Runner, much less Hosseini’s newest book.  In defense of my library, it is limited by dwindling funds from the state and restrictions from publishers.  (See my post on the tenuous relationship between publishers and libraries.)

But I still wanted the book.  I’d heard about a new e-book lending service called Scribd, so I decided to check it out.

Scribd: the Netflix of e-books

Most of the people I know get their e-books from Amazon, B & N, or the library.  The library is obviously the cheapest option, but book selection can be dreadful.  And e-books for Kindle or Nook cost at least $5 (Except for the classics!  They’re a bargain!)  The idea of having access to an UNLIMITED number of e-books for a reasonable monthly fee sounds tempting, doesn’t it?

Enter Scribd.  It started in 2007 as a self-publishing site for professional papers that eventually included creative writing.  In October 2013, Scribd partnered with HarperCollins Publishing to offer an e-book lending subscription service.  The the developers of the updated Scribd site want it to be what Pandora is to music, or what Netflix is for movies and T.V. shows.

What you need to know about Scribd

  • Readers can start with a one month free trial.
  • A subscription costs $8.99 per month.
  • A subscription gives you access to an unlimited number of e-books, including books from the HarperCollins back list and “thousands” of best-sellers.
  • Scribd is compatable with any device that has a web browser, including computers, smart phones, and tablets.  (This includes the Kindle Fire, since it is basically a tablet.)
  • It is NOT compatable with regular Kindles or Nooks.
  • Scribd offers you personalized suggestions to help you find new books and authors.

Sounds great, right?  Well, I think it could be, if you don’t want new releases.  When I browsed the site, I saw books like Bridge to Terebithia and Water for Elephants.  These are wonderful novels, but not new releases.

I didn’t register for the free trial; something told me that I wouldn’t find And the Mountains Echoed at Scribd.

Where do you get your e-books?  Have you ever tried a subscription service like Scribd?  How did it work for you? 

Click the link below to spread the word about Scribd:

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Thanks for stopping by!

Julia 

 

What Does Uber Really Mean?

wondrous memeWelcome to Wondrous Words Wednesday, an awesome meme for word nerds hosted by Kathy at Bermudaonion.net.  Join the fun- share a new word you learned this week.

My entry isn’t exactly a word.  But after I heard my 13-year-old son use “uber” for the hundredth time, I decided we needed to clarify the meaning.

“My hair is ubershort now,” my son said upon leaving the barber shop.

“Do you even know what that word means?” I asked.

“It’s not a word, it’s a prefix,” he said.

What an ubernerd. 😉

Uber \’ü-bər\ German, from über, meaning over or beyond; being a superlative example of its kind or class; to an extreme or excessive degree; super

 

My ubercool photo of uberimpressive lava rock formations on Maui.
My ubercool photo of uberimpressive lava rock formations on Maui.

 

Word Nerd Workout

Use uber in a sentence.  Or, if you’re like my friend Kristen and you’re sick of hearing this prefix, share a more creative or original way to describe something as “superlative or extreme.”

Thanks for getting nerdy with me today!

Julia